Emily Dickinson's “The Soul has Bandaged moments" (J512)
The Soul has Bandaged moments—
When too appalled to stir—
She feels some ghastly Fright come up
And stop to look at her—
Salute her— with long fingers—
Caress her freezing hair—
Sip, Goblin, from the very lips
The Lover— hovered— o'er—
Unworthy, that a thought so mean
Accost a Theme— so—fair—
The soul has moments of Escape—
When bursting all the doors—
She dances like a Bomb, abroad,
And swings upon the Hours,
As do the Bee—delirious borne—
Long Dungeoned from his Rose—
Touch Liberty—then know no more,
But Noon, and Paradise—
The Soul's retaken moments—
When, Felon led along,
With shackles on the plumed feet,
And staples, in the Song,
The Horror welcomes her,
again,
These, are not brayed of Tongue—
http://www.poetryfoundation.org/poem/246444 Source: The Poems of Emily Dickinson: Variorum
Edition (The Belknap Press of Harvard University Press, 1998)
Please tell me the electricity of this poem makes
the hairs on the back of your neck stand up. BTW, four line stanzas but
Dickinson arranges one verse paragraph to have six lines and ends the poem with
a slant couplet. That shows her concern
for patterns and some non-ordinary counting.
Some “ghastly Fright” approaches
the soul, salutes her, and then
with “long fingers” caresses “Her freezing hair.” Long is
not an extraordinary modifier
of “fingers,” but I think it
evokes a skeletal image here—part of
the personified Fright. And freezing evokes a strange image here. Does hair freeze?
The Fright then sips at
her lips the way her lover had earlier. She exclaims that it’s an
unworthy picture that superimposes this Fright
on the image of her lover. I’ll admit
the grammar in that second verse paragraph
is garbled. Whatever the best
way of untangling it is, certainly she is disturbed by the joining
in her mind of this Fright and her lover. Sometimes I wonder
whether William Faulkner
had this poem in mind
when he wrote the ghoulish story “A Rose
for Emily.” That’s about
another soul who needed to be bandaged.
Then she enters
a second movement, when the soul
escapes. It dances like a bomb, perhaps in the sense that you can’t very well restrain a bomb. Are you going to throw YOUR body on it? As this image modulates into that of the bee,
something new enters—the
hint of The End. The soul swings upon
the Hours like a bee. Where is this bee—long Dungeoned from his Rose— headed? To oblivion. But notice the grammatical
distortion that explodes when she transforms
the noun “dungeon” (a prison cell)
into a verb. The soul and the bee escape and as they Touch Liberty they are wiped out, they know
no more. That would mean the
end of knowing . . . but then the Master (that’s Dickinson!) give us a lesson
in using line breaks. The escaped bee and soul know Noon, and Paradise. Knowing did not come to an end
as we slow readers thought.
The third movement
of the poem garbles not only the
grammar but the metaphors and
images. It begins by telling us the escaped
soul has been recaptured, presumably by the
Fright. It is led along like
a “felon” with shackles on its plumed feet, / And staples—in the
Song. The implied image is
that of the soul as a bird of some exotic kind (“plumed
feet”?). And then the metaphoric energy leaps back up to the extraordinary level of
the soul’s having “Bandaged moments.”
The recaptured soul’s song is stapled. That’s hard to visualize but it IS powerful and
its emotional meaning is unmistakable.
(What an Incredible Metaphorist Dickinson was!) Do you agree?
The last two
lines confirm our suspicion that the
Fright, now renamed the Horror, is her captor, sarcastically welcoming
her back to renewed torture. The last simple declaration is that we mortals
do not speak, bray, of the doom we face.
When too appalled to stir—
She feels some ghastly Fright come up
And stop to look at her—
Caress her freezing hair—
Sip, Goblin, from the very lips
The Lover— hovered— o'er—
Unworthy, that a thought so mean
Accost a Theme— so—fair—
When bursting all the doors—
She dances like a Bomb, abroad,
And swings upon the Hours,
Long Dungeoned from his Rose—
Touch Liberty—then know no more,
But Noon, and Paradise—
When, Felon led along,
With shackles on the plumed feet,
And staples, in the Song,
These, are not brayed of Tongue—
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